Posted on Aug 30, 2012:
There went the serpent - slithering with movement, and shiny in the beach sunlight. It looked daunting as I turned my head to watch it go by. It was slick with sweat and slime. Do serpents sweat? This one did, because it was tattooed on the dainty back of that wicked girl. That one that always brought the same flourishing animosity that I could feel through every ounce of my being. I sat and watched her go by in that same red bikini she always wore with the serpent’s tip hidden by the back of her bottoms. I always wondered how far that reptile went, or where...damn, I wanted that serpent.
There went the serpent - slithering with movement, and shiny in the beach sunlight. It looked daunting as I turned my head to watch it go by. It was slick with sweat and slime. Do serpents sweat? This one did, because it was tattooed on the dainty back of that wicked girl. That one that always brought the same flourishing animosity that I could feel through every ounce of my being. I sat and watched her go by in that same red bikini she always wore with the serpent’s tip hidden by the back of her bottoms. I always wondered how far that reptile went, or where...damn, I wanted that serpent.
People are strange, and there are always plenty to observe on the beach. But whenever she showed up my skull started to burn and tingle, and inside of my head took place a forum of her and I and spectators surrounding us in a circle with looks of lust on their faces. Ordinary people like from the olden days, only their eyes were defective.
Like a revenge flick that I created and mastered with precise skill; I played out the details in my head.
As
she lie face down upon the table, I held the scalpel with exactness as I
brought it to the tip of the serpent’s tongue at the base of her neck
and pressed into the flesh; following the curve of her neck as the thick
blood started to flow. There was a stifled scream, which sounded like a beautiful melody against the drumming of the midnight rain. THAT SERPENT WILL BE MINE.
“Snap out of it Lucy!! Why are you always daydreaming?” I shook my head and looked up as the ugly bitch spoke again. “It’s almost time for your dinner, and I’ve got to take you back or they won’t let you out on the beach next weekend.” I
felt her arms wrap around me under my arms and lifted slightly as I
rolled my eyes in disgust and then looked down at my hideous leg stumps
being dragged, leaving behind wide tracks in the sand. Oh well, there’s always tomorrow, I thought. A new day and a new dream...
This is so cool seeing this again. Especially with that crazy picture intact. Lerrrrrrrrrv this pea pop and I Lerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrv you!
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ReplyDeleteproudmomma8
Excellent write
August 30, 2012
ChimesofLife48
Thank you very much!
September 11, 2012
proudmomma8
you are welcome
September 11, 2012
pastormike
oooh.. excellent! really vivid description.. nice and nasty… good work!
August 30, 2012
ChimesofLife48
Thanks pastermike! I like being nasty and nice…yep I flipped it around. :-)
September 11, 2012
pastormike
right in His Bunglenesses sweet spot.. really did nail it!
September 11, 2012
BungleGrind
this just gets better every time that i read it. truly a filthy masterpiece. i liked that you only gave so much and left the rest up to the readers imagination. just perfect. peafect, even. i wanna like this and lick it up to the filthy heavens.
August 30, 2012
ChimesofLife48
Thank you very much for liking and licking! I like creating filthy things and masterpieces for you to enjoy sure make me giddy!
September 11, 2012
cleanshaven
ITCH NOT YER BERFDAY BUT I LERVED THIS BOG. I AM GUNNA GIVE YOU MONKEY HIGH FIVES WHICH ARE ACTUALLY HIGH TENS.
August 30, 2012
ChimesofLife48
YAY FOR HIGH TENS!!!!
September 11, 2012
musicequalzorgasm
Me-WOW. That was a neat and yummy blog. The GREAT BIG KITTY has spoken.
August 30, 2012
ChimesofLife48
Neat and yummy are such great words to be spoken from my GREAT BIG KITTY! xoxo
September 11, 2012
SugarandSpice
Very good, shockingly good
August 31, 2012
ChimesofLife48
Thank, I like that reaction! ;-D
September 11, 2012
SteamPunk
The atmosphere is so intense – loved it! You and BG need to write a story together – if you haven’t yet – my mind boggles at that notion.
August 31, 2012
ChimesofLife48
Thank you very much! Bungle and I are actually working on a story together, and hope to get it posted on our DeadbyDawn account around Halloween time. :-)
September 11, 2012
SteamPunk
That’s awesome! I’m going to keep my eyes peeled when Halloween comes.
September 14, 2012