Original post Oct 27, 2010
Title: Just One of Many Past
Scribbles Challenge #91
Write whatever you like using this picture as your inspiration:
Always respect the dead!
this is what he pointedly said-
I watched with eyes of dread-
as he slammed him on the steel bed-
and he prepared his bloated head-
with tools his innards were shred-
his body would be cleaned and bled-
and with chemicals he would be fed-
I think his name was Ted-
I wish I would have quickly fled-
I should have watched TV instead-
the floor was oh so wet and red-
I think this man was overfed-
he may have eaten too much bread-
his intestines began to spread-
I slipped upon a tiny thread-
on the sliminess my feet did tread-
I landed on the floor widespread-
the words on the wall could not be read-
I saw the light high overhead-
the rest is to remain unsaid.
funfreak
ReplyDeleteOOOoooooo creepy, Chimes! And you rhymed, too…..how very, very clever!
October 27, 2010
ChimesofLife48
i love to be creepy! Thanks funfreak…and by the way…that avatar rules!
October 27, 2010
BungleGrind
holy crap baby! that was awesome.you are rocking these things! i’m totally gonna have to try this one.
October 27, 2010
ChimesofLife48
Thanks babe! I can’t wait to see what you come up with!
October 27, 2010
Munkyman
nice, all done in AA rhyme scheme too.
October 29, 2010
ChimesofLife48
Thank you Munky! It wasn’t too hard to find lots of words that rhymed with dead.
November 09, 2010
this. fucking. rules. i just love going back and reading my old chimes classics. i just love it when my baby goes dark. drak, even. you and me do drakness like nobody else. this story poem was like 50 shades of drakness!
ReplyDeleteAw thanks babe...we got the drak of all that is draker than any drakness EVER!!!
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