I felt the first cut right below the knee as it sliced hotly through my flesh and severed my leg completely off. Blood poured from the stump in warm pulsing waves as I fell to the ground like a rag doll, limp and completely helpless....
My perpetrator laughed and roared in a demonic way as he brought the sharp weapon down again into the side of my soft defenseless stomach. The hot metallic taste of blood and bile spewed up and filled my mouth as I tried to scream, but only managed a weak gurgle, as I spit up the contents previously held within....
My throat ripped in pain as a deep gash was cut and completely demolished my wind pipe...
Some unknown weapon then powerfully punctured my right eye completely obliterating it....
I am on the ground, in a pool of blood and slime - all that remains in tact is my left eye as it clearly sees the ax continue to rise and fall as if in slow motion, transforming my being into a chopped up pile of hot human goo...
But my light still does not fade as I can still see clearly...sharply from my left eye. My futile murderer is now walking away, and it was then that I realized with trepidation, that my eye was....autonomous.
BungleGrind
ReplyDeletei am in awe of you once again.i am spewing sexy manitou confetti juice from all my stumps.please come spew with me.
May 12, 2010
ChimesofLife48
I’m on my way now…
May 12, 2010
Evetspordlaw
Indiviuality would best describe my thoughts on this write. Was a gory delight and I would be ONE to say I liked it.
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May 13, 2010
ChimesofLife48
Well I like to provide individuality and gory delights, and I am glad that you liked it – thanks for stopping by and commenting.
May 13, 2010
uncle_charlie
At the begining I said…….."What the crap".
Half way through I said…….."Holy shit!"
At the end I said……"Sweet!!"
May 13, 2010
ChimesofLife48
Hey I like those reactions! Thanks!
May 13, 2010
Munkyman
Part 2 "Revenge of the Disembodied Eye"
I’m picturing an optic nerve wrapped around the trigger of a .45/.70 while the eye sits behind the scope, terrorizing a lumber camp
May 16, 2010
ChimesofLife48
…hmmm that’s an idea.
May 16, 2010