It’s a New Moon tonight.
And within myself I can feel the fight.
The liquidity of my soul peaks and wanes.
The blood rushes and heats my arctic veins.
Like the ocean I am a graceful murky fluid inside.
The battle cannot be seen from the shell on the outside.
Deep within there’s a harsh judgment taking place.
It creeps inside and poisons me with huge disgrace.
But...
The sun will shine tomorrow after the New Moon’s decline.
And upon my hair the warmth of its rays will shine.
Then I will gaze up at the crisp blue sky so vast.
And all of the gloom and pain will have faded into the
past.
Realist91919
ReplyDeleteNice. Love the moon pic
February 03, 2011
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ChimesofLife48
Thank you….that was one of the best new moons I could find.
February 03, 2011
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BungleGrind
whoa, that was a great write sweetie.very creative and i loved those pictures too.i absolutely loved that phrase " arctic veins." wish i had thoght of that one myself.
February 03, 2011
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ChimesofLife48
Thanks babe. I don’t know what got into me. I just learned that it was a new moon tonight and that inspired me to write something about how the moon can have certain affects, and this is what spewed out of me.
February 03, 2011
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funfreak
Ooooooo…..that was GOOD! Loved the way you crafted the idea of how you felt inside. I really liked that…..a new moon, huh? Interesting perspective, Chimes!
February 04, 2011
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ChimesofLife48
Wow thanks! I love it when you give your thoughts on anything I do. It means a lot to me! :-)
February 05, 2011
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ThruMyEyes
So relevant to my now existance!
February 04, 2011
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ChimesofLife48
Well if that’s the case, then at least you do have some sunshine in there that helps to chase away the darkness. Thanks for the comment. :-)
February 05, 2011
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RedJewel87
beautiful
February 04, 2011
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ChimesofLife48
Thank you so much.
February 05, 2011
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shyann
wow thats all just wow
June 12, 2011
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ChimesofLife48
Thanks Punch!
February 11, 2011
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